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The way up to heaven Roald Dahl

The way up to heaven Roald Dahl

The way up to heaven Roald Dahl

To name your story, you have to think of the overall message and what you want your audience to understand from the story. Also, make it relevant and easy to remember. Examples:
- theme: Audition, by Barbara Walters;
- main character's name: Robinson Crusoe, by Daniel Defoe;
- use of gerund to describe the plot: Waiting for Godot, by Samuel Beckett;
- time or numbers: 1984, by George Orwell;
- line that best describes the theme: Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen;
- key object or possessive in the story: Charlotte's Web, by E.B. White;
- story setting: Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea, by Jules Verne

CLOSING

OUTCOME

This is the closure section of the story.

Brief ending for your story

Try answering these questions in order for you to come up with a closure:
- Have all problems been solved?
- Is it clear what happens with all your characters in the story?
- Has the challenged transformed your main character?
- How do the characters feel in the end?

Finally Mrs. Foaster gets to go to Paris to meet her grandchildren and took them for wolks and bought presents. Then she took plane weeks later back to New York city but no one was waiting for her at the airport or her house. Her place was lonely and had a terrible smell. She decided to call the elevator repair company to ask them to come fix the elevator, it seemed her husband had been stuck in the elevator for this whole time since she´d been gone and had left him alone until he finally had a tragic death inside the elevator, from anguish and devastation.

CLIMAX

This is the moment when the main character passes by the last obstacle and finally faces its great challenge.

How does your main character finally solve the problem?

The climax usually follows one of these patterns:
- Realization (the character puts together all the pieces of the puzzle and solves the mystery);
- Resolution (the character needs to transforms itself during the confrontation);
- Choice (the character has to make a difficult choice).
Type in your answer.

Not wating for her husband the next morning and finally getting to catch the plane.

MIDDLE

OBSTACLES

There wouldn't be any tension and excitement in your story if there weren't any obstacles that get in your character's way.

What stands in the way of your character to accomplish his goal?

Usually, the obstacles come in sets of three. This way, your story can evolve and be exciting for your audience.

can't swim very well, shark invasion, sea stormstrong allergy to dogs, pack of wolves, hunters invasionloses coin, finds coin but it is soon stolen, hard time deciding whether to return or not to his real lifereceives medication, fight with dangerous patient, someone reveals his escape planmemory loss, no support from family, the game takes place earlier than expectedOther

Arriving late to the airport and that the flight had been delayed.

MOTIVATION

Your character(s) need(s) motivation in order to solve the challenge(s).

Motivation

Why does your character need to confront this challenge? What does he/she expect to accomplish by solving it?

will marry in 3 dayshe/she loves the childcan fix the mistakes in the pastwants to help other misplace patients escapechance to win the World Chess ChampionshipOther

The pictures Mrs. Foaster had kept of her grandchildren for a long time.

CHALLENGE

Each story has a main character and that character usually needs to solve a problem or challenge.The character's challenge is the one that creates tension throughout the story.

Other Challenges

Type in any other challenges which the main character or other characters in the story need to face.

Getting to Paris so that Mrs. Foaster can met her 3 grandchildren. She had seen them in pictures and loved them, they meant so much to her.

Other challenge

Not to miss the flight because her husband was running late

Her flight got delayed for a day Mrs. Foster is happy to stay at the airport alone because it means she won’t miss the plane, but night falls and travelers are told to come back in the morning. Despite her fear that he will somehow keep her from boarding the flight, Mrs. Foster calls her husband. He insists that she stays at the house with him, even though the servants have already left for vacation and she went back home. The next day she went to the airport.

The next day Mrs Foaster mas ready very early to catch her flight but when they were on the way to the airport Mr Foaster told Mrs Foaster that he forgot a present he wanted to give to Elen. They went back home to find it and Mrs Foaster found it when Mrs Foaster went up the stairs of their house and there was not much time left so she decided to tell the driver to drive fast to the airport and that her husband will simply get a cab to the club. She caught her flight and felt a sense of calmness.

Got to Paris and wrote a letter to her husband each week telling everything.

What is the main challenge in your story?

Try to come up with an interesting challenge with which the character needs to struggle.

wakes up one morning in the middle of the oceandiscovers that his/her child turns into a werewolf at nightis sent back in time after rubbing an old coinis misplaced in a mental institutionbecomes blind before the most important game in his careerOther

To overcome Mrs Foasters fears and anxieties She is suppose to be boarding a plane to Paris to visit her beloved daughter and grandchildren, but her husband is running late to accompany her to the airport.

BEGINNING

SETTING
Sensory detail

Sensory details are important because they create depth in your setting. Choose the aromas, sounds, sights, things related to touch, smell and taste.

smell of fresh breadscent of freshly cut grassrain falling onto the windshieldbirds singingfluffy cloudsrural hillssticky honey on the tableclothstinging moustacheOther

Bad weather cool days

Weather

The weather is an important element in your story because it can highly influence the ambience in the story and the mood of the characters.

What are the environmental reactions?

And what about the character(s)'s emotional responses to these weather conditions? Type them in.

lonelinessblissexcitementangerfrustrationfearloss of propertyloss of lifeOther

frustration

How a fear can grow into serious anxiety.

Element

Choose the ones that will be enclosed in your story line.

rainbowthunderlightningsnowrainwindhailmistfrosthoarfrosthumidityOther

humidity

Bad Weather

Foggy

Catastrophic event

Does your story take place during catastrophic weather?

hurricanetornadotsunamiearthquakeflooddroughtOther
Winter

Each season has unique weather and events, whose description can also enrich your text.

SpringSummerAutumnWinterOther
Time

What time of the day does the story takes place?

dawnmorningafternooneveningduskmidnighttwilightbreakfastlunchdinnersunrisesunsetfull moonOther

morning

Takes place In the Foaster house in New York city, Airports and Paris
CHARACTERS
Walker

Serve and help Mrs and Mr Foaster.

kind

Flat - Butler

Mr. Foaster

Character's name


Type in the name of your character.

Main Goal and how he was

Main goal


What is your character's main goal?

fight Evilfind lovedefeat his/her enemyrule the worldmake friendstime travelmake an awesome discovery

Show his wife how not to stress about everything. He was seventy years old and lived with his wife on a six floor house in New York City on east 62nd street with 4 servants.

Personality

risk-taker

Character traits


Which traits best describe the character's personality?

introvertedloyalkindindependentquick-thinkingadventuresomeidealisticsweet-naturedcalmrisk-takercreativewittystrictfussyweirdclumsyharshaggressivecarelessclingingcowardlycrueldeceitfulimpulsive

Antagonist

Type of character


Decide what type of character he/ she is.

Protagonist (main character): Harry PotterAntagonist (main character's opponent): Lord VoldemortFlat (stereotypical character): Mr. Filch from Harry Potter sagaRound (his/ her personality develops throughout the story): Hermione GrangerStatic (his/ her personality doesn't evolve throughout the story): Professor McGonagollDynamic (dramatical change in personality): Neville LongbottomConfidant (the main character trusts him/ her): Ronald WeasleyFoil (contrasting character who enhances the personality of another character): Draco Malfoy
Mrs. Foaster

Type in the name of your character.

Get to Paris to meet her grandchildren and see her only daughter and she is married with a french man

Main Goal

What is your character's main goal?

fight Evilfind lovedefeat his/her enemyrule the worldmake friendstime travelmake an awesome discoveryOther

Character traits

Which traits best describe the character's personality?

introvertedloyalkindindependentquick-thinkingadventuresomeidealisticsweet-naturedcalmrisk-takercreativewittystrictfussyweirdclumsyharshaggressivecarelessclingingcowardlycrueldeceitfulimpulsiveOther

Worried most of the time

The thought of being late will get her to a terrible state.

As a result a small muscle in the corner of her left eye would tremble.

Good and loving wife

Fearful

Missing a train, plane or anything it was like a illness

Frustrated

impulsive

cowardly

Type of character

Decide what type of character he/ she is.

Protagonist (main character)Antagonist (main character's opponent)Flat (stereotypical character)Round (his/ her personality develops throughout the story)Static (his/ her personality doesn't evolve throughout the story)Dynamic (dramatical change in personality)Confidant (the main character trusts him/ her)Foil (contrasting character who enhances the personality of another character)Other

Protagonist (main character)