by Dickson Peter 9 years ago
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"Are you done packing?" your mom asks you.
"I'm done packing," you say.
You drag your luggage to the car where your mom, your brother Sahib, and Duke the dog are waiting.
"You're so slow," Sahib says.
"Shut up!" you say.
Your mom then told both of you to be quiet and sit in the car with the dog that is quieter than both of you.
"Are we there yet?!" both of you ask.
This car ride seems to last forever for you because your brother can't stop annoying you.
Your mom yells, "We're at the cabin now."
You and Sahib jump out of the car.
Your brother whispers, "I heard that this cabin is haunted."
"It's just a rumor, that's what everybody says," you say feeling a bit scared.
We all start heading towards the cabin when you see someone looking at you. You show Sahib but then the person is gone. Sahib starts laughing at you because he thinks you believed the rumor. You go into the cabin with Duke. Duke starts barking at something, you move closer to take a look and you see creepy dolls covered in dried, blood. Right there, beside the dolls there is a blood-red knife.
"Sahib, there are dolls in the living room and they're staring at me," you exclaim.
"You're seeing stuff, you scaredy cat," your very annoying brother answers.
When you turn around the dolls are gone and you notice a note attached to the knife. It had a message on it. "WE OWN THIS CABIN, WATCH OUT."
This totally creeps you out and you don't know what to do.
You decide to tell your brother that there is a note.
Narrative continues
Physical description: includes clothes
Personality:
Present 2016
Main Setting:
Cabin in the forest
Other Settings:
At home
At the exorcist's home
You (the reader)
Character Traits:
-curious
-observant
-sneaky
-brave
Mom:
Sahib:
-Annoying
-Smart
-Humorous
Duke:
The exorcist: