One of the final shots were Faith can be seen walking away from the group doesn't completely make sense- she walks away and then the final shot shows her walking away from the group again- consider taking out the initial shot of her leaving the group as this is not needed.
In one of the shots in the skate park, Faith's (The artist's) arm can be seen in the corner of the shot that she is not meant to be in- crop this shot.
Good use of new footage to create a stronger, clearer narrative.
Gaps to be filled
There are still a few gaps within the video that need to be filled e.g. extra lip syncing shots.
Overall
Ensure any further editing completed from now on does not effect the timing of the current lip syncing shots.
An interesting video that incorporates narrative, abstract and performance aspects.
Some good visuals that now come together to form more of a narrative.
Lip Syncing
Apart from minor adjustment, lip synching is very accurate and in time- well done.
There are a couple of lip syncing shots within the middle section of the video that are just a little out of time.
